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At the beginning of the story, the city of Kabul is described as a magical and wonderful place. It is said that there are coloured, sparkling birds that sing beautiful melodies, magnific fountains. Furthermore, there are delicious fruits all over the place.
In addition, there are splendid gardens full of roses that release sweet perfume, and the sun is always shining like a golden coin.
However, when the girl visits that enchanting place, she realizes that instead of being a very nice place, it is disgusting.
Morever, the city is in ruins, it has been destroyed and it last all its beauty. The city of Kabul is shattered and broken.
As a conclusion, the city of Kabul was a myth, an illusion created by old tales. It is not amazing or incredible, it is a wrecked city.
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